Tolisaari ninu chusinapudunaa madilo spashtamayina oka bhaavana
yella tarabadina nireekshana saphalamayina
aanandum naa kallalo....
nee roopam parichitame ayinaa
nee maata suparichitame anipistunnaa
naa manassaakshiki maatrum neevinkaa
aparichitamenanna sandehum
premanu namme manushulaki kuda
preminche manasu piney anumaanum
kaani laya baddamayina naa gunde chappudu
nundi swaasa niswaasala daaka naa sareerum lo
prati kadalikaa neekosame ani nammutoo
nee kosame vechi unna naa manasu kaagitum pi
prema santakum cheyataaniki vastaavaney aasato
ney vechi untey.....
maraninchaanani lokamantondi,
jeevinche unnanani premalokamantondi..
mari neevemantaavu naa ishta sakhi!
17 comments:
Jags
ni kosam chalamandi waiting aite nuvventi nuvvu waiting ani pettav.kani chala baga rasavra,nenu fidah
orey nuvvu nijangaa evarini love cheyyaledaa, nenu nammanu
"premanu namme manushulaki kuda
preminche manasu piney anumaanum"
manasuki kallu levu
vinadam, nammadam, aasalu repadam, preminchadam matrame telisina manasuki...
kallanu aadaramga teesukoni tanu pondhe prati anuboothini chudalanukuntundhi....
kani kallaku avvanni kanipeeyavu..
ila kallameedha aadharapadina manasu...kalla nundi aasinchinadi pondalenappudu....pichchi manasu!!!! tanameede tanu anumaaninchadam modalupettukuntundhi....
preminche prati manishi anubhavinche phase idi...
jags!! nee poems chaduvutunappudu maaku nijalanu grahinche avakasam dorukuthundhi....
i loved this poem..keep writing more....
okate prashna raa..
nuvvu premalo padakunda rastunnavu ila ante, raaste emaipothavu ani anipistundi..
aa poem aite chaala bagundi :D.
very close to how some people feel ;)
tell me where u get the inspiration :)
"maraninchaanani lokamantondi,
jeevinche unnanani premalokamantondi..."
nuvvu marininchina ..andari hrudayallo jeevistavu ani"kavitvalokam antundi"...
@bhav
nannu champe prayatnaalaa....but thanx, its lovely
@vani
Naaku anta scene ledu
@priya
undile ayesha takia ani
@sweta
Thanx for those compliments
@Freaky
adey aaalochistunnanu raa, ento premalo paditey naa position enti ani
ento! nee kavi hrudayam :)..okanthata ezga ardham kadu!!
As they say ..
Science is about taking something that no one understands and explaning it in a way that everyone does. With poetry, it is the other way around.
:) archie
@archie
Thts the best way to pass compliments
hmm... jags u remind me of someone . but love is always not a fair game...
but ur poems are awesome...
Inka eemantundi definetly vaaakey..:)
Kool Poem buddy I think there is some one very spcl for your inspiration
Oh God Why haven't I come across this blog previously??
Simply wunnerful... Ur poems r really nice
@Lunatic
Ppl wid wonderful feelings have alwyas been inspiration to me. No one in spl yet
@Mohit
Thanx
aaha...chala baaga cheppaaru.
"nee roopam parichitame ayinaa
nee maata suparichitame anipistunnaa
naa manassaakshiki maatrum neevinkaa
aparichitamenanna sandehum"
ee lines simply adurs... idi choosi eppudo try chesi vadilesina naku malli telugu lo poetry rayalani inspiration vastondi!
Keep it up jags!
hmm...
chaaalaa baagundi.. anduloki telugulo.. kada inkaa chaala nachindi.. emadhya eppudu telugulo kavitvalu vinale choodale .. soo adirindhi.. hehehhee.. n nenu commenting lo kasintha weaku.. soo spel. chck is compulsory :p
Mr.jags...Each and every word coming from you are heart touching. pls pls pls keep writting and keep touching our hearts with your wonderful words forever and ever
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