Saturday, November 19, 2005

virigipoyina kala


Chandamama sooridu rendu okey saari kanipinche andamayina lokamadi,
velgulo cheekati nirliptatani alumukunna bhaavaalu akkaduntaay,
cheekatilonchi bayataki prasarinche velugu rekhalu
jeevitum meeda aasani penchey apuroopa staanamadi,
pakshula kila kilalu vinipistune untaay teeyani sangeetum laa
jeevitum lo nenu gadipina kshanaallaage tamakem pattanattu
urakalestu munduku saagipotunna jalapaatum....
paayalugaa vidipoyi akkadekkado kolanuni cherindi
kaani andulo naa pratibimbum kaanaraadu, naa oohalaku roopu ledu ga
naa aalochanalannee poola rooopam lo vikasinchedikkade,
ee pooloani chuste meeke telustundi naa aalochanala andum
adigo aa seetakokachiluka tana rekkala rangulni naa manasuki addindi ikkade
gatapu smrutulannee shilpala aakruti daalchi cheragakundaa migilipoyaayi
pasipaapa chirunavvuloni swachchata undedikkade
anduke naaku ee kalala prapanchum ante praanum
kaani ninna monna virigipoyina o kala
kaarumabbulaa naa prapanchaanni chuttesindi...
ee andhakaaraanni bharinchey balum naaku ledu
anduke ney veedipotunnaa, innaalla naa anubhandaanni tenchunkuni
ney kalalukanna prapanchaanni veedipotunna, repu meeda aasa chaavananta varaku
ee prapanchum lo bratikestaanu...malli kattukuntunna aasala harivilluni
maro kanneti bottu uppenayi maro saari muncheyyakundaanaa
gontuloni aardratani, kallaloni chemmani..gundeloni premani
ikkade vadilesi potunnaa..gayala gurtulu maasipoyaaka malli kaluddam
(This is written after feeling a cute love story from my friends life........I felt it to be her beautiful dream, but just wanted to express wht exactly a person feels when a dream turns a disaster, Let me know did i put the right words? )

6 comments:

XmPt said...

good way to express a dream
kani dont give up already.. ante love ni ani kadu, hope ni :)

ArChaNaR said...

thats so true.
i have no words to say!

jags said...

@Freaky...its just a feeling came out of my heart when i heard such a disaster

Vijay said...

really gud dude u have the gift of poetry..keep it up

Anonymous said...

I thought you stopped writing poetry, really amzing to see your new way of expressing feelings. But wirte thoat love poetry also.

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