nee raaka kai eduru chusina naati nundi nestum
naa kanula maatuna daagina sumadhura swapnam
mugdamanohar nee roopamenani teliyaledaa?
nee gunde gadilo naakika chotu ledani telisinaa
naa gnaapakaala gootilo ninnu padilamgaa unchaanantey
nee pi naa prema apaaramayinadani teliyaledaa?
neevu telusanna, teliyadanna...jarigindi ghorum
nee yedabaatu naa jeevitaanike oka pedda saapum
neevu dooramayyavane nijum nannu baadistunna
neevu naatone unnavane andamayina abaddumto
ney jeeveinchey unnaa jeevaschavam laa
marichipodaamani manasunadugudaamante
marapuraani gatum chedu nijamai nannu parihasistondi
"meeru" , "neevu" gaa maarinaa ninnu-nannu .."manam" gaa
maarchaleni naa hrudayam oka roju moogabotey
naa yeda savvadi vinatum maruvaku cheli!
endukante adi migilchina chivari chappudu
nee perey palukutundi....
16 comments:
jagsy, evarura neeku hand ichchindi? super raasaav.
nee kavitvam bagundi.. oka tune este paatalu rayagalava :)
archie
hmm nee kavithanu chaduvuthuntee neeku life lo edo peda tragedy story unnatte anipisthundi enti storyyy ;)
anyways kavitha chaalaa bagundhi
nee gunde gadilo naakika chotu ledani telisinaa
naa gnaapakaala gootilo ninnu padilamgaa unchaanantey
nee pi naa prema apaaramayinadani teliyaledaa?
ee lines nachayi
kani
"neevu naatone unnavane andamayina abaddumto " ---adi abadham endukoo artham avvaledu
motham kalipi chepalanteee good
swapna
kya mamu,
is baar real tragedy bana dia poem ko.
kya hua re :O!!??
bhaya paddava.. nene :)
nuvvu prathi sari different feel tho rastunnavu ra poems ni, adi ela rastunnavo neeke teliali..
something that relates to many people ;)
peace :D
@swapna
"nee yedabaatu naa jeevitaanike oka pedda saapum
neevu dooramayyavane nijum nannu baadistunna
neevu naatone unnavane andamayina abaddumto... "
ippudu chaduvu.
nuvvu-nenu "manam" ga maralekapoina manam gadipina kshanalu inka naa gnapakaala gootilone badram ga vunnai...anduke nuvvu vasthavaniki na daggara lekapoina nuvvu na daggare vunnav... naa gundalone vunnav.
i dont think he is a looser...
gud one jags!!! i liked his true love for her...
who the hell asked you to keep your pic as a looser there, I hate you for this
who the hell asked you to keep your pic as a looser there, I hate you for this
Dear friends,
Thanx for ur love, care and concern...naa pic peditey adi kudaa tragedy poetry lo chaala mandini baada pettinavaadini avutaa ani konta mandi friends msgs chusaaka anipinchindi. So pic change chesaanu. thanx for ur love once again.
Awesome boss, great work, keep going, "aaganantondi manasu" and "toduraava chirugaali" are my favs.
Kavitvam raayagalagatam oka goppa kala, kaani daanni inta manasuki hattukogaligelaa raayatam, u r really gifted boss, I think u should try writing lyrics for films.
devi
@Thanq chaitu and devi
Boss intha superga ela raayagaluguthunnav....
"meeru" , "neevu" gaa maarinaa ninnu-nannu .."manam" gaa
maarchaleni naa hrudayam oka roju moogabotey
naa yeda savvadi vinatum maruvaku cheli!
This line was really good....
Great going.....
Praveen Villa
@Praveen....thanq, its just da truest feeling taken from my friends life experiences. thts really nice, ppl are loving them
hello!
nee links section lo nannu add chesko radu?
neenu ninnu add chesa ..naa blogspot lo..
- archie
u leave me speechless!
Thanx Ram,
these sort of compliments always give me new strength
Hey Its good man,Konni words heart nu touch chastunnai.
Good ,iam excepting still some more from you
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