Wednesday, January 31, 2007

nenu





Manam andariki nachchalani ekkada ledu....okariki nachchananta maatraana manam cheddavaallamayipomu, nachchite manchi vallamoo ayipomu...okari meppu kosam maarutoo potey...edo okaroju manalni manam gurtinchalenantagaa maaripovaalsi vastundi.



"nenu nenugaa bratikina kshanamey naaku jeevitam"


17 comments:

Arch said...

hmmmm "nenu nenuga bratikina kshanamey naaku jeevitam" e matalone poetry motham vundhi!!
all i can say is :) !!!!!

adarsh said...

"nenu nenugaa bratikina kshanamey naaku jeevitam"

baavundi..infact alochinchela chestundi..

enduku manam manala jeevincham..?

enduku edo oka musugu tagilinchukno jeevinchalsi vastundi??

nijamaina freedom manam mananga jeevinchinappude kada..

jags said...

@archana...

Nannu nenu ikkada pettatam lo succeed ayyanu ane anukuntaanu...:) thanx for the comment

@ Adarsh

very true adarsh, chaalaa saarlu manaki teliyakundaane manam kaani kaani musugulo manam chikkukupotunnaam..telisi konni saarlu teliyakundaa konni saarlu...

Anonymous said...

ఇష్టాలను స్పష్టంగా చెప్పింది ఈ కవిత.

చాలా బాగుంది.

విహారి
http://vihaari.blogspot.com

Rama Deepthi Muddu said...

"naa niliettu sakshyam nenu"..
rightly used words..
manam manala batakadam lo unde trupti entha bavuntundo anubhaisthey gaani teliyadu..
dani valana kashatalu vachina sare oka mondi dhairyam manalni santosha pedutundi ani nenu nammuthanu...
nice poem..

Praveena said...

hmm as usual baaga rasvau... bhavam chala bagundi..

The phrase with wich i can relate to the most: "Naa ootamiki oodaarpu nenu.. naa ontaritanaaniki toodu nenu..!! how true!!

nenu nenugaa bratikina kshanamey naaku jeevitam..

idi chadivi..prathi okka kshanam nenuga brathakalanipistundi :)

asalki blogataniki time ledu naaku.. thanks 4 keeping me posted.. hope u will do that in future too!!

jags said...

@vihari
dhanyavaadamulu...

@JOSH
"Naa niluvettu saakshyum nenu" usual gaa manlni manam compare chesukovataaniki chaalaa saarlu hero la to no leka leades to no cricket players to no polchukuntaam...kaani manaki manalni minchi polika undadu ani naa strong feeling..every person is unique...

@Pravs
So nice to see ppl seeing themselves in my poetry...no one can love u as much as u can...sounds like a contradiction, but true in most of the cases

రాధిక said...

ఒక 6 నెలల క్రితం మీ బ్లాగుకి వచ్చాను.అప్పుడు బ్యాగ్రౌండ్ మ్యూజిక్ కూడా వుండేదిమీ బ్లాగులో .చాలా ఇంప్రెస్ అయ్యాను.తరువాత మీ బ్లాగ్ మిస్ అయ్యాను.చాలా చోట్ల వెతికాను కాని కనపడలేదు.ఇన్నాళ్ళకి మళ్ళా గూగుల్ వల్ల ఇటు రాగలిగాను.ఇక మిస్ అయ్యే సమస్యే లేదు.బుక్ మార్క్ చేసేసాను.

jags said...

@radhika
ee prapancam chaalaa chinnadi anna maata nijame ani chaalaa vishayaalu manaki prove chestu untaayi..inta chinna prapancham lo naa blog maatrum meeku kanipinchakundaa elaa untundi.... prati kavitani chadavatame kaakundaa vaatiki taggattugaa feel avutu comments chesinanduku dhanyavaadaalu:)

Revathi said...

hi jags.
really nice.
nenu koncham badha kaligina koncham santhosham kaligina eppudu anukuntu vunatu "naaku nenu" ani.

"na" ane person lo enni felling vuntayo anni chala baga chepparu.

chala chala bagundhi.

jags said...

@Revathi
ivi almost andarilo unde feelings..may be undalsina feelings..so nice tht u liked it..

me said...

wats ur orkut profile link??

Anonymous said...

yes u are right, okariki nachite manam manchi vallam aipomu.

jags said...

@anonymous

u must have ignored the second line...okariki nachchananta maatraana manam cheddavallamoo ayipomu...

Note: I usually dont reply to ppl wid masks.

Ravi Kanth said...

maava..kavitha tho patu Photo mast apt ga undi..

Anonymous said...

mitrama prati okkariantarmukanni andamga avishkarinche NENU chala bagundi............

jags said...

@mario

thanq mitrama