I love to be in warm company... though sometimes i do crave absolute solitude... am COMFORTABLE both ways, in crowds and on my own... but i do need SOMEONE to share everything i FEEL inside totally UNEDITED.
marachi pommante.. all the lines are just awesome... it took me some time to get the tense' of the poem though... well i missing prose for some weird reason...
ee kavita lo bhaavum....chadive vaallu recieve chesukune daanni batte untundani abhipraya paddaaanu..and more over asalu a concept lekundaa chadivinappudu u can feel the difference every time u go thru it.
hi!! i cudn't get everything u posted(language prob)... but i sure cud understand ur feelings towards love.. n i feel whatever u wrote is just amazing!! keep up da gud work. tc!!
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premalo padakunda ila raayadam impossible..
marachi pommante..
all the lines are just awesome...
it took me some time to get the tense' of the poem though...
well i missing prose for some weird reason...
"ne raaka kosam choosthunte kadhalani mondikesthondhi.."
no words...
nice one!! :)
@jags,
enduku naa prashna ku samaadhanam ledu???
@Adarsh
mee prasnalone samadhaanamunnappudu, neninko samadhaanamelaa cheppanu?
so.. a lucky gal evaru maa andariki parichayam cheyachuga?
yeah yeah sure, sure...tondarlone chestaaa
its really nice
"kaalanevaru aapalerani evaru chepparu??
nee raaka kosam eduru choostunte kadalanani mondikestundi..."
chaal baagundi..
eesaranti.. poetry maatram raasi prose vadilesaru.. idi maatram baale.. :P
@Adarsh
ee kavita lo bhaavum....chadive vaallu recieve chesukune daanni batte untundani abhipraya paddaaanu..and more over asalu a concept lekundaa chadivinappudu u can feel the difference every time u go thru it.
new year resolution aa?? no poetry??
waiting for another diamond
hi!! i cudn't get everything u posted(language prob)... but i sure cud understand ur feelings towards love.. n i feel whatever u wrote is just amazing!! keep up da gud work. tc!!
@revathi, Josh
shall try to upload one very soon.
@Nandini
thanx
sir.. .next release eppudu :P
@adarsh
meeru adigaaka kudaa raayakundaa elaa untaa:)
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