Wednesday, December 27, 2006

tirigiraani kshanam...




16 comments:

Adarsh said...

premalo padakunda ila raayadam impossible..

J-O-S-H (My Bench !) said...

marachi pommante..
all the lines are just awesome...
it took me some time to get the tense' of the poem though...
well i missing prose for some weird reason...

Archana said...

"ne raaka kosam choosthunte kadhalani mondikesthondhi.."

no words...

nice one!! :)

Adarsh Padegal said...

@jags,

enduku naa prashna ku samaadhanam ledu???

jags said...

@Adarsh

mee prasnalone samadhaanamunnappudu, neninko samadhaanamelaa cheppanu?

adarsh said...

so.. a lucky gal evaru maa andariki parichayam cheyachuga?

jags said...

yeah yeah sure, sure...tondarlone chestaaa

Revathi said...

its really nice

adarsh said...

"kaalanevaru aapalerani evaru chepparu??

nee raaka kosam eduru choostunte kadalanani mondikestundi..."

chaal baagundi..

eesaranti.. poetry maatram raasi prose vadilesaru.. idi maatram baale.. :P

jags said...

@Adarsh

ee kavita lo bhaavum....chadive vaallu recieve chesukune daanni batte untundani abhipraya paddaaanu..and more over asalu a concept lekundaa chadivinappudu u can feel the difference every time u go thru it.

J-O-S-H (My Bench !) said...

new year resolution aa?? no poetry??

Revathi said...

waiting for another diamond

Nandini said...

hi!! i cudn't get everything u posted(language prob)... but i sure cud understand ur feelings towards love.. n i feel whatever u wrote is just amazing!! keep up da gud work. tc!!

jags said...

@revathi, Josh

shall try to upload one very soon.

@Nandini

thanx

Adarsh Padegal said...

sir.. .next release eppudu :P

jags said...

@adarsh

meeru adigaaka kudaa raayakundaa elaa untaa:)