chaalaa mandiki premistunna ani cheppadaaniki konni samvatsaraalu patttestundi, kontamandikayite jeevita kaalame patteyyochchu, kaani anta viluvayina premani kaadu pommanataaniki kshanakaalam kudaa pattadu. simple gaa cheppestaaru we called it off ani...vaallandariki okkate vinnapam, preminchinapudu praanamanna istaamantaaru kadaa, prema aasinchedi praanaalu, pranayaalu kaadu ...prema nindina nee todu...prema todunnappudu balam,adey veedipote balaheenata avutundi.
"aatma okkatayinappudu aatmabhimaanum verendukavutundi
prema aadhaaramayinappudu bhaaramendukavutundi!"
prema aadhaaramayinappudu bhaaramendukavutundi!"
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"Naloni ishtanni gurthinchi nannu, neeloni premaki parichayam chesindhi nuvve kadaa...."
That was awesome :)
...prema todunnappudu balam,adey veedipote balaheenata avutundi!!
very true.......
awesome poem
simple super .hey ninu pogada daniki language lo kotha words kanibetali yemo............
"aatma okkatayinappudu aatmabhimaanum verendukavutundi
prema aadhaaramayinappudu bhaaramendukavutundi!" -how true... its the ego which does the harm...!!!
dude... all i wld wanna say is.. just dont quit writing.. there are lotta em like me who wld wanna read this pg!!
ciao.
@Swapna
Thanks....actualy ee lines enduko naa manasuku daggaragaa anipinchaayi..andukenemo avi anta cool gaa unnaayi...
@Archana
Thanks archu:) very true ante may be nenu nijaalu baagaa cheptaanemo
@Bangaarum
ayite definitely kotta language kanukkomari..:)
@Praveena
Yeah very true...ego do play a vital role in any kind of relation...yeah shall definitely keep writing more n more in the near future..anyones life is a book of experiences..reading many interesting books these days:P
"dooram tho paatu nisabdhamu perigipotondi"
ego hurts..
u dont realize what u miss...
bythe time u realize..u will be alone with ur regretted ego in ur heart!
amazingly written...
its more like reading a feling.."feeling the feel of a feeling" than reading a poem...
too good..
and the wait for a poem for this long is worth it!
and yess..experience will make u come up vth these!
@Swetha
U got it right...being in love is oneness n selfless..:)
@Josh
feelin a feel is indeed a gr8 feelin if u get the right feeling
"Aatma okkatayinappudu aatmabhimaanum verendukavutundi
Prema aadhaaramayinappudu bhaaramendukavutundi!..."
Get Well Soon..
I believe above 3 words are more needed now than praises abt ur poetry..
@Adarsh
Thanks for tht care...if every poetry written here is taken from my own life, then i guess I would have stopped riting poetry by now. Here just wanted to express how ego n love/concern have clashes....this cud happen in any relation.
@jags..
did i ask for any clarification? :P
@jags,
please...please.. don't say that u r writing all this, without urself being in love..
i cannot believe that..
"aatma okkatayinappudu aatmabhimaanum verendukavutundi
prema aadhaaramayinappudu bhaaramendukavutundi!"
Chala Baga cheparu
really EGO is the barrier between Hearts...
చివరి వాక్యాలు చాలా చాలా నచ్చాయి.దూరం పెరిగినా పర్లెదు కానీ నిశ్శబ్దం మాత్రం పెరగకూడదు.అది జీవితాన్ని నరకం చేస్తుంది.మీ కవితల్లో చాలా ఫీల్ వుంటుంది.అందుకే నేను ప్రతీ కవిత దగ్గర ఆగి ఆలోచనల్లోకి వెల్లిపోతున్నాను.ఆ ఫీల్ నుండి తిరిగి రావడానికి చాలా సమయం పడుతుంది.
"చాలా ప్రశ్నలు మన మధ్య ప్రశ్నలుగానే మిగిలిపోతున్నాయి అర్దం చేసుకోవల్సిన చోట ఈ అపార్దాలెందుకు? సముదాయించుకునే చోట ఈ సందేహాలెందుకు?"
ఈ రోజే మొట్టమొదటిసారి మీ బ్లాగ్ చూసాను. i am almost speechless.
ప్రతి ఒక్క కవితలోను ప్రతి వాఖ్యం ఎంతో నిజం.
Very touching.
simply superb..
I used love sweet/happy feeling and romantic poetry and songs and do like poetry and songs now but the only difference is that now I like to read sad and deceiving kind of poetry and these days I look for such new posts and literally can't stop crying..
great job -- i am so much lost that i cannot even get these words to express my feelings and just feel lost. its so touching that I keep reading n times still feel that there is lot more to be expressed..
really very touching..
Lots n lots of people speak about "LOVE" and hardly few know what is true Love and its the True Loving person thats always deceived at the End..
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