Thursday, June 29, 2006

Pavitra prema !

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Every should learn how to end a poetry from you, marvellous effort

freak-y said...

hmmm..
nelakosaraiana rastunnavu, good :)

and about the poem...
short and simple.
last line tho chinchesavu

freak-y said...

hmmm..
nelakosaraiana rastunnavu, good :)

and about the poem...
short and simple.
last line tho chinchesavu

adarsh said...

pavitranga? .... i couldnt understand this in current context...? can you elaborate? ;)

jags said...

@Adarsh ....akkada avasaramayite prema kosam praana tyaaganikayinaa siddame ani cheppatam naa mukhyoddeshum....and anta goppa prema kosam chesey tyaagam pavitramayinadi ayyi undaali...appude aa tyaaganiki ardumuntundi...so aa context lo pavitrumgaa maranistaanu ani use cheyyatam jarigindi

Divine Thoughts said...

man..u seem to be writing really good poems ..but i dont understand them. but i like ur blog..for its look and simplicity :)

Rama Deepthi Muddu said...

oooooh i am late.. short n simple.. even i had doubts vth pavitramga word there... but cleared! amazing! but dont u think, "one should live vth the memories, sweet or sour,rather than a solution of dying?" i mean for this poem its good..but generally...?? its jus a thought though cant be put in actions... well let me read it again n again..may b i vl change my idea..
but the pic u used is apt to the core! akasam chooste konni sarlu bhayam vestundi.. nd feelings vthin too are so delicately horrifying...
i know its tuf to write poems frequently... as endamuri puts in, "oka kavi oka vakyam rayalante oka talli tanu padda 9 nelala kastani padatadu"...
keep posting..i see there r too many fans for u waiting for ur posts.me included..njoy!

jags said...

@Hari

Thanks for dropping in here, dats a sweet compliment indeed.

@ Josh

Nijamey premaki maranam parshkaaram kaadu, kaakapote annee manamanukunnatte jarigitey idi jeevitamendukavutundi...meeru naa kavitalanu chadavatam to paatu vaatini analyse cheyyatam naaku santoshaannistundi...marokka saari thanks

అభిసారిక said...

Touched !!

చైతన్య said...

that's wonderfulll....
chaalaa baagundanDi

adarsh said...

boss.. ne blog regular ga visit chestanu..;
neeku testimonial kooda raasaanu..
kaani inta varau nee full name kooda teliyadu..

whats ur full name jags :p