Kavitalani adbhutangaa raayalane goppa korikalemi levu, okka kshanam nenu pondina anubhootini meeru pondagaligitey anta kante aanandum ledu. Anukoni kaaranaala valla dooramayina prati snehitudi aavedanani ponduparachaalani chesina prayatname ee kavita.
vidipovatam evarikii saradaa kaaadu, kalisundatam andariki saadyum kaadu....
35 comments:
mamu..awesomeeeeee
finishing kummesavu...
Friendship ki end ledani baga chepparu.hatsoff, meeku meere saati
Heyy Jagss mana [:p] poetry chala bagundi. ilane rastu undu inka inka. A good poetry on friendship. and pic kuda bagundi hi hi .[:d]
@Jilli.. alludoo thanx
@swati ...nice to know tht u liked it
@Dimple.. hihi navventi bunny la
eee font to chadavadam chaala kastanga undi boss....
too hard to read jags!
could u revert back to the picture font please?
modatisari kastalanu edurukovalsinapudu
cheyandinchi toduga nilichina ne sneham
e kalam to kalige marpulatopatu dani roopu maradu
manam kalisunappudu kanna kalalu inka maruvaledu nestam
aa asayalu nuvichchina spurthi tone sadhinchagalanane bhalamaina nammakam to bhayalderuthunnanu
nenu vesina modati adugulo toduga nilichina ne sneham
naa jeevitha prayanam lo prati adugulo bhagam ga nilichipothundhi...
@Adarsh and uday : Font chaged
@Swetha...wish u all the best for ur future and thanx a lot for ur compliments. i cherish ur friendship
jags frendshipki asalu end laedhani chala simple wordslo describe chaesavu
kani dhantlo entho depth undhi
nijanga nuvvu rasindhi feel ayithae matram frends vidipovadam kastam
simply superb
adbuthanga :p rasaaru boss....
kavitha to paatu, kinda unna prose kooda baagundi...
especially vidipovatam evarikii saradaa kaaadu, kalisundatam andariki saadyum kaadu....
vidipovatam evarikii saradaa kaaadu, kalisundatam andariki saadyum kaadu....!!
hmm no words to describe..!!
ur writings take me into a different mood..!!
i truely believed in every line of "Snehamantey...?" !!
@Siri naa view kudaa adey manchi friends vidipokudadu...
@Adarsh thanq buddy, by the way meeru cheppina back ground music gurinchi chustaanu.
@praveena
thanx, nenu poetry kinda mention chesinadi kudaa adey...poet mind lo start ayyindi reader heart lo end ayite aa poetry ki ardum untundi ani evaro chepparu.. naa kavita ardavantamayyindane bhaavistaanu
very well written...
vidipovatam evarikii saradaa kaaadu, kalisundatam andariki saadyum kaadu!!!!
very true..
and
mee kavitha ardhavantamayinade..!
no second thoughts on it..
good to c ur post so soon.. and hey thanx for dropping at my place too..
keep posting..tc
@Josh
Nice to see your comment, so nice tht to see ppl feeling it.
lyk always loved reading your poem .. n i loved these line --
** vidipovatam evarikii saradaa kaaadu, kalisundatam andariki saadyum kaadu...
so true!!!
heheheheh...
it seems like ppl started liking ur prose more than ur poetry..
@archie.... thanx as usual:)
@Adarsh
Usaul gaa nenu peotry raasaka adi chadivinappudu nenu anukunna feeling fulfill kaavali, kaani enduko ee poetry raasaaka edo missing anna feel vochchindi..so adi fill cheyyataniki prose added. may be aa prose lekapotey poetry lo edo teliyani veliti and poetry lo aa depth lekapotey aa prose ki anta meaning raavu.
adee sangati...:)
yes...they supplement eachother...;)
hey jags
ella unnavu???
well i was browsing Blogswara
n the frist thing it striked me was you.
Well .. its a blog abt indian bloggers .. who compose music, write lyrics n sing.. then even composed few songs too..
nuvvu kavtvalu baaga raastavu kada.. so why not take it to a next step?
there are no telugu songs as yet.. aalochincu :)
you've been tagged :)
@Archie
I checked the site but unfortunately no where it was mentioned for telugu authors, but surely if any such oppurtunity comes i shall give a try...
Thanx for the concern
chAlA bAgundanDi... i love this...
i could feel it...
"viDipOvaTam evvarikI sarada kaadu, kalisi unDaTam andariki saadhyam kaadu"
true!
first time here... will slowly go through your other posts.
chala adhbuthamga undi mee kavitha and alochana :)
vidipovatam evarikii saradaa kaaadu, kalisundatam andariki saadyum kaadu....loved these lines :)
I had real nice time going thru ur posts...keep it up..Keep goin.
nice boss.. keep it up
bossu.. kotta kavita epppudu...
tvaraga raasthara.?. ledante raasta rokho cheyyamantara? :p
@chaitanya, Srinivas, jyoshna
thanx for dropping here:)
@adarsh
Most probably by this week end shall update one...
weekend vacchi vellipoyindi kavi gaaru.. :p
waiting for your next writing...
మీ పదాలు ప్రాణాన్ని తగులుతూ వెళ్ళాయి..
కలిసివుండటం లోని సంతోషం,
విడిపోవటం లోని వేదన
అందరికీ తెలిసినా ..
కలయికలు ఆగిపోవు
వీడుకోళ్ళు ఆగిపోవు
కానీ, మీ ఈ ప్రయత్నం కనీసం ఒక స్నేహాన్ని ఒక క్షణ కాలం నిలిపినా మీతో పాటు నేనూ అనందిస్తాను!
hi jags.. i dont know u.. but u made me feel the essence of life with ur writings.. really gr8 work.. naku nee kavithalu chaala baga nachayi.. jus simple and heart touching..
@Keerthi
Thanq, ee chinna prapancham parichayaalu avasaramantaavaa, chinna palakarimpu chaalu....:)
"కష్టమొచ్చినప్పుదు కన్నిటికంటే ముందు నేనున్నాను అని గుర్తుంచుకో"...ఎంత అద్భుతం గా రాసారు.మాటలు రావట్లెదు చెప్పడానికి.అలా అని మనసు మౌనం గా లేదు.ఈక్షణం మీ కవిత ఫలితం నా చెంపలపై జారుతుంది.
found your poetry on a youtube video. Liked it a lot and placed it in my blog...then somebody else pointed out your blog..so here am i conveying my pleasure in reading such words.
For other complemens for you please see in my blog.
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