Friday, May 26, 2006

Snehamantey...?



Kavitalani adbhutangaa raayalane goppa korikalemi levu, okka kshanam nenu pondina anubhootini meeru pondagaligitey anta kante aanandum ledu. Anukoni kaaranaala valla dooramayina prati snehitudi aavedanani ponduparachaalani chesina prayatname ee kavita.

vidipovatam evarikii saradaa kaaadu, kalisundatam andariki saadyum kaadu....

36 comments:

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JiLLu said...

mamu..awesomeeeeee
finishing kummesavu...

Anonymous said...

Friendship ki end ledani baga chepparu.hatsoff, meeku meere saati

jags said...

@Jilli.. alludoo thanx

@swati ...nice to know tht u liked it

@Dimple.. hihi navventi bunny la

adarsh said...

eee font to chadavadam chaala kastanga undi boss....

Anonymous said...

too hard to read jags!
could u revert back to the picture font please?

Anonymous said...

modatisari kastalanu edurukovalsinapudu
cheyandinchi toduga nilichina ne sneham
e kalam to kalige marpulatopatu dani roopu maradu

manam kalisunappudu kanna kalalu inka maruvaledu nestam
aa asayalu nuvichchina spurthi tone sadhinchagalanane bhalamaina nammakam to bhayalderuthunnanu

nenu vesina modati adugulo toduga nilichina ne sneham
naa jeevitha prayanam lo prati adugulo bhagam ga nilichipothundhi...

jags said...

@Adarsh and uday : Font chaged

@Swetha...wish u all the best for ur future and thanx a lot for ur compliments. i cherish ur friendship

adarsh said...

adbuthanga :p rasaaru boss....
kavitha to paatu, kinda unna prose kooda baagundi...
especially vidipovatam evarikii saradaa kaaadu, kalisundatam andariki saadyum kaadu....

Praveena said...

vidipovatam evarikii saradaa kaaadu, kalisundatam andariki saadyum kaadu....!!
hmm no words to describe..!!
ur writings take me into a different mood..!!

i truely believed in every line of "Snehamantey...?" !!

jags said...

@Siri naa view kudaa adey manchi friends vidipokudadu...

@Adarsh thanq buddy, by the way meeru cheppina back ground music gurinchi chustaanu.

@praveena

thanx, nenu poetry kinda mention chesinadi kudaa adey...poet mind lo start ayyindi reader heart lo end ayite aa poetry ki ardum untundi ani evaro chepparu.. naa kavita ardavantamayyindane bhaavistaanu

Rama Deepthi Muddu said...

very well written...
vidipovatam evarikii saradaa kaaadu, kalisundatam andariki saadyum kaadu!!!!
very true..
and
mee kavitha ardhavantamayinade..!
no second thoughts on it..
good to c ur post so soon.. and hey thanx for dropping at my place too..
keep posting..tc

jags said...

@Josh

Nice to see your comment, so nice tht to see ppl feeling it.

Anonymous said...

lyk always loved reading your poem .. n i loved these line --

** vidipovatam evarikii saradaa kaaadu, kalisundatam andariki saadyum kaadu...

so true!!!

adarsh said...

heheheheh...
it seems like ppl started liking ur prose more than ur poetry..

jags said...

@archie.... thanx as usual:)

@Adarsh

Usaul gaa nenu peotry raasaka adi chadivinappudu nenu anukunna feeling fulfill kaavali, kaani enduko ee poetry raasaaka edo missing anna feel vochchindi..so adi fill cheyyataniki prose added. may be aa prose lekapotey poetry lo edo teliyani veliti and poetry lo aa depth lekapotey aa prose ki anta meaning raavu.

adee sangati...:)

adarsh said...

yes...they supplement eachother...;)

ArChaNaR said...

hey jags

ella unnavu???

well i was browsing Blogswara
n the frist thing it striked me was you.

Well .. its a blog abt indian bloggers .. who compose music, write lyrics n sing.. then even composed few songs too..

nuvvu kavtvalu baaga raastavu kada.. so why not take it to a next step?

there are no telugu songs as yet.. aalochincu :)

uday said...

you've been tagged :)

jags said...

@Archie

I checked the site but unfortunately no where it was mentioned for telugu authors, but surely if any such oppurtunity comes i shall give a try...

Thanx for the concern

చైతన్య said...

chAlA bAgundanDi... i love this...
i could feel it...

"viDipOvaTam evvarikI sarada kaadu, kalisi unDaTam andariki saadhyam kaadu"

true!


first time here... will slowly go through your other posts.

Jyoshna said...

chala adhbuthamga undi mee kavitha and alochana :)

vidipovatam evarikii saradaa kaaadu, kalisundatam andariki saadyum kaadu....loved these lines :)

I had real nice time going thru ur posts...keep it up..Keep goin.

శ్రీనివాసరాజు said...

nice boss.. keep it up

adarsh said...

bossu.. kotta kavita epppudu...
tvaraga raasthara.?. ledante raasta rokho cheyyamantara? :p

jags said...

@chaitanya, Srinivas, jyoshna

thanx for dropping here:)

jags said...

@adarsh
Most probably by this week end shall update one...

adarsh said...

weekend vacchi vellipoyindi kavi gaaru.. :p

చైతన్య said...

waiting for your next writing...

Nisheedhi said...

మీ పదాలు ప్రాణాన్ని తగులుతూ వెళ్ళాయి..
కలిసివుండటం లోని సంతోషం,
విడిపోవటం లోని వేదన
అందరికీ తెలిసినా ..
కలయికలు ఆగిపోవు
వీడుకోళ్ళు ఆగిపోవు
కానీ, మీ ఈ ప్రయత్నం కనీసం ఒక స్నేహాన్ని ఒక క్షణ కాలం నిలిపినా మీతో పాటు నేనూ అనందిస్తాను!

Anonymous said...

hi jags.. i dont know u.. but u made me feel the essence of life with ur writings.. really gr8 work.. naku nee kavithalu chaala baga nachayi.. jus simple and heart touching..

jags said...

@Keerthi

Thanq, ee chinna prapancham parichayaalu avasaramantaavaa, chinna palakarimpu chaalu....:)

రాధిక said...

"కష్టమొచ్చినప్పుదు కన్నిటికంటే ముందు నేనున్నాను అని గుర్తుంచుకో"...ఎంత అద్భుతం గా రాసారు.మాటలు రావట్లెదు చెప్పడానికి.అలా అని మనసు మౌనం గా లేదు.ఈక్షణం మీ కవిత ఫలితం నా చెంపలపై జారుతుంది.

భావకుడన్ said...

found your poetry on a youtube video. Liked it a lot and placed it in my blog...then somebody else pointed out your blog..so here am i conveying my pleasure in reading such words.

For other complemens for you please see in my blog.

Chandana said...

Sir..meru chala baga raastaru..I have seen that you have stopped writing after 2009...has anything changed your life in 2009 which made you stop writing poetry..u have the originality that i have never experienced..can I know the reason..I am a big fan of yours..I love to read then when i am depressed and feel good..I expect you to write atleast for your fans...

pls rayandi.. your fan..Chandana

chandana said...

also please let me know if you are writing blogs in any other sites.. waiting for your encouraging update !!

Miss your heart touching poems..

jags said...

@Chandana
Thanks for writing in. Nice to knw tht u liked them.Well seriously have no clue abt why i stopped writing them n no idea if i will write them in future either.I am not writing on other websites.If by anychance I write them in future i will surely update u.