Eppudayinaa Sneham, prema ee renditi madya vaadopavaadaalu jariginappudu, naaku teliyakundaane nenu sneham vype moggu chuputaanu. appudappudoo swardam kudaa sneham mundu otamani angeekaristundi. Iddaru premikulu vidipovaalsi vaste vaalla madya preme kaadu vaalla staanaalu maaripotaayi..aa yedabaatu iddarilo okarini gaayaparustundi...kaani sneham lo dooraamenta periginaa chivariki vaallu vidipovaalsi vachchinaa snehitulugaane vidipotaaru, iddaroo santoshamgaa undagalamanna taruvaatane vidipotaaru. satruvulugaa miligilipoyina vaalla gurinchi nenu maatlaadanu, premalo laagane sneham lo kudaa infatuations to modalayina snehaalu untaayi."prema odipovachchu kaani sneham kaadu,
snehituluga vidipovachchu kaani premikulugaa kaadu"
snehituluga vidipovachchu kaani premikulugaa kaadu"
17 comments:
i totally agree with ur statement.. snehitulu oodipovachukani..premikuluga kaadu!
last stanza in the poem is really nice... the gradual feel of the poem from depressed states to rising...shades of hope ,and faith in friendship...awesome.. but y is it so tragic? i somehow felt a strong sense of grief in it...
but it is like.. sitting on the beach side seeing the sunset and staying there till the sun rises and watch the slow sunny shades in the sky and finally a very bright sunny morning.. a day full of hope and confidence!
well written.. nice to see the prose after a long time...
last line is superb....
@JOSH
Intavaraku naa poetry lo positive feeling to start ayyi tragedy to end cheyyatam, ledaa mottam positive feeling ledaa mottam negative feeling unna poetry raasa. Eeesaari complete negative feeling...hopeless situation nunchi oka hopeful situation loki raavaali anna hope ni present cheyyataaniki chesina chinna prayatname ee kavita. Chaalaa saarlu mananunchi dooramayina friends ni gurtu chesukuni baada padatamo ledaa vaallani hate cheyyatamo chestaam... asalu Hatred feeling anedi enta varaku correct ani analyse chestunte...friends vidipovatam ane concepte tappanipinchindi....once again thanx for ur comment
Jags This Poetry is reallyyyy wonderfulll .... sooo heart touching :) .... I liked it sooo much .... I need not specify this is very very very very marvellous as all ur poetries are Lovely :0 i am really proud to have a greatest Friend like you ....
good one :)
@Neethi
thanq for all the affection:) honoured.
@adarsh
thanq sir
cricket cricket annaru.. cochin lo doola teerinda :P
@adarsh
aa maatram teerakapote elaaa:P
happy days choodandi, u will love that movie
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its a nice tht and a nice quote at the end!!!...
eppudu.. eppudu. malleppudu..
adbhutam
Chaala Baaga raasaru Jags Garu..
hats off to YOU!!
the poem is in general very excellent.
but i believe that you are yet not clear with the depth of love... maanasikanga, saareerikanga manishiki jeevamposedi prema. naranaraalalo jeerninchukunedi prema. premikulu vidipovadamemiti... premaku otamemiti?! premalo yevaroo gaayapadaru! okkosaari kanneeru raavachchu; kopathaapaalundavachchu... all are "sweet" experiences in LOVE... my dear friend JAGS, hope soon you see the "REALM OF LOVE"
@Anonymous
Thanks for letting me know your opinion abt my poetry. Every1 has their idea, feeling, opinion abt certain feelings call it Love/Friendship/any Relationship. Love lo annee sweet experieces ani cheppaaru...kaani anni sweet experiences unte premalo vishaadhamanede undadu. prati naanaaki rendo vypu untundi...premalo kudaa anthe. meeru cheppinadi chaalaavaraku emotional attachments varake...practicality ni kudaa jodinchi chudandi....appudu nenu anukunnadi kudaa nijame anipinchochchu.iddaru premikulu santshumgaa vidipoyina sandharbhaalani mee life lo enni saarlu chusuntaaru???
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