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I love to be in warm company... though sometimes i do crave absolute solitude... am COMFORTABLE both ways, in crowds and on my own... but i do need SOMEONE to share everything i FEEL inside totally UNEDITED.
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"evari gelupo kadidi, na otami matrame" enduko ee lines chaalaa baga nachchesayi
evari gelupo kadidi.. na ootami matrame.. amazing lines!
nee kosam nenu unnanu ani cheppina na dharyam ootami..
very well compared..
second stanza is too good.. intensity kept increasing as it proceeded... well concluded.
the first line stole the whole thing!
too good.. worth the wait!
has a good positive spirit...
ootami gurinchi raasi kooda... it made u smile at the end...
well spirited...
concluding lines are long but delivered the msg well.. intelligently written..
sorry...had to write it twice..
@Rekha
Thanq...aa lines to ne kadande poetry start ayyindi.
@JOSH
Thanq Deepthi, negative response vostundanukunnaa...good to see u got my feelin right.
"odipoyanu ane nijam oppukovatam" lone nijamayina gelupu untundi
excellent.లోకంకోసం మనిషి గా ఓడిపోయినా లోపల్లోపల జరిగే అంతర్మధనం ఆగనంతవరకు మనం మంచి మనుషులమే. ఎప్పటికయినా గెలిచేతీరుతుంది యద ఘోష[ఆ ఘోష మంచి గురించి అయినా సరే,చెడు అయినా సరే]
Hi jags..
great one to get back to this pg with!
idi chadivaka...
na manasulo unnavanni...
nuvvu chala baga presnet chesavu ani anipisthundi..
@Radhika
chakkagaa chepaaru, nijame antarmadanam okasaari modalayyaka, manam odipoyaam ane nijum oppukunna taruvaata...ika gelupu vypu parugulu teeyalsinde:)
@Praveena
Thanq thanq, mee thots ni refelct ayyelaa raayatam chaala kashtum, meerasale creative genius kadaa:)
votama?? meeda?? evarannaru??
mimmalni, mee manchitanannani,
mee snehanni, mee abhimannanni dooram chesukunna (chesukuntunna) vallede VOTAMI..
mimmalni voDinchalani choosina vallaNu kooda.. emi anakunda.. votimi meede antunnare?? ee manchitanamey mee GELUPU..
gelupu.. mee manchitanindi..dooram chesina.. "MANAM"anta okate anutnnaduku..
gelupu.. mee snehanidi.. vennupotu podichina.. inka "sneham" antunnaduku..
@Anonymous
evaru meeru?
nenevaro eepaatiki meeru gurthupattaranukunna!
@Adarsh
The way u analysed makes me feel good.
nena, nenekkada analyse chesanu?? :P
tadupari kavitha eppudu ???
probabaly ee vaarantamunakallaa up cheddam anukuntunnanu
maata tappina vallanu em cheyyali??
@adarsh
maata tappakundaa chusukovaali:P
ayite meeku shiksha tappadu...
vundandi... ippude velli GARUDA Puraanam chadivi vasta ....
Heyyyy jagsss one more greattt poem ... u know what i am falling short of words for ur poems :)
gelupu eppudu swamy??!!!
asala ee poem ki kaantext yenti??
aha oorne adagatanna....
@ravi mama
yery chimple kaantext
life lo manaki em jariginaa whole n sole responsibility manade, remaining however u take it
"nee kosam nenunnanani cheppina naa dairyam otami"..ee line nannu ventaduthundhi..chalaa nachindhi..
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