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I love to be in warm company... though sometimes i do crave absolute solitude... am COMFORTABLE both ways, in crowds and on my own... but i do need SOMEONE to share everything i FEEL inside totally UNEDITED.
13 comments:
touching...
gelupu metla ettu telisinappudu otami anchulu entha padunuga unte matram bhayam enduku??
very well written....
నేటి సమాజ పరిస్తితిని టచింగ్ గా చెప్పారు.కులాల కాష్టం లో పసిహ్రుదయాలు కాలిపోతున్నాయి.అంతరాలు చెరపాలనుకునే యువత మతాల అగ్నిజ్వాలలకు ఆహుతయిపోతుంది.చివరి రెండు వాక్యాల నిర్మాణం చాలా బాగుంది
@Josh
gelupu metla ettu telusu kaabatte, gelavatam anta suluvu kaadani cheptunnaa:)otami chesina gaayaalu inkaa gurtukostune unnaayi andukenemo bhayapadipotunnaaa....thanx for ur comment
@Radhika
nenu cheppalanukunna bhaavaanni bhaavayuktumgaa vishleshinchinanduku krutagnatalu....:) nija jeevitam lonunchi teesukune prati amsham hrudayaniki hattukupoyettugaa untundani naa ee prayatnam maro saari rujuvu chesindi.
oka point of time lo nenu controversal topic ni select chesukuni justify cheyyagalanaa ani samshayinchaanu..mee comment chustunte nyaayam chekurchaanane anipistundi; thanq for going thru my blog
heart touching poetry...
openeing lines were gr8...
ipudu unna paristitini chala touching ga cheparu.....
really alanti andaru parents chadavalasina poetry..inta heart touching poetry chadivina taruvata aina vallu marachu yemo...
gr8 poerty..
hmmm nice title... was wondering what u wud name it..
apt one..
Koncham ATHI ga unnayi mee kavithalu !
but a good attempt..!
@Anonymous
konchem ATHI gaa react ayinattunnav
Pure thots expressed in apt words!!
Preminchina vallani kolpothamemo anna alochanani chala positive ga chepavu...
Emi cheyaleni helpless situation lo vunna edho cheyalane thapana oka manchi kavitha ga roopondhindhanipisthondhi!! :)
Thanq thanq. indulo aavedanani nissahaayatato kalipi cheppaanu
Very Touching and also very true :).. Bada, prema, Peddarikam.... anni kalbosi chepav Lovely ....
Hi Jags, I am truly impressed with your poetry. I dont know whether you experienced a similar situatuion in life or its just the poet out of you who put these lines. But your "kavithvam" is really touching. I can related myself throughout it.
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