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I love to be in warm company... though sometimes i do crave absolute solitude... am COMFORTABLE both ways, in crowds and on my own... but i do need SOMEONE to share everything i FEEL inside totally UNEDITED.
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hey jags,
ammazing....this is really a very nice one. mee bolg ni chala kalm nunchi chadivina, enduko eppudu emi raayaalani naa matti burraki thattaledu...lol..better late than never ani..chala touching gaa undi.
kavitvam oka merupu..
kaadadi podi maatala koorpu..
anadaaniki best example ee kavitaa..and above all ur whole blog.
In short, am fan of ur poetry.
get goin.
Cheers,
pramu
indaaka cheppadam maricha..
concluding prose superb..
mee kavita chaala baagundani inka "ela cheppanu". inkola cheppadam raavatledu...lol
maatalakandani bhavalu manasulo medinavela,
mounam kuda andamayina bhashe avuntundi.
gud work..
inta manchi (romantic) kavitalu raastunnaree. deeniki spoorthi evaro nijam cheppandi..
andari mundu adigite "ela cheppanu" ani maatram anakandi..
Hi........
Meeku appude...I mean chatting chesinappude mee kavitha gurinchi cheppochhu kaani comment box antu okati undi kada. dinini vadadam kosam cheppaledu
Ela Cheppanu antune chadive vaallaki mee message pass chesaru.
meeru ela cheppakapoina mee mounam ane bhashanu naalanti vaallu ardam chesukuntaru.
Really amazing ending two lines very nice.
Hope we meet again. Emaina mistakes unte...Pls. excuse me.
yeh nijanga chala santhoshamga undi.naaku telugu bhasha ante chala istam.poetry ante inka istam.Really enta baaga rasavu.Comments chesina vaariki nee reply chusanu. Analisation chala bagundi.
"Vidipovatam evariki sarada kaadu..
kalisundadam andariki saadyam kaadu"
enta bavundi phrase.chala chala impressive.
I was lucky enough to find a friend like u.
@Pramu
Naa blog ni regular ga visit chestunnanduku thanx. meeru raasina lines baagunnaayi..:)
@adarsh
virgos are known to be romantic,me just proving to be the perfect virgo
@shailu
Telugu is such a sweet language, nachchakundaa elaa untundi:) thanx for dropping in here
ending statemnets are always amazing... poem danikanna bavundi.... intresting...and by the way memu insipiration evaru ani adugutunnamu..and u r simply skiping the topic...!
@Deepthi
Nannu telisina vaallu, naaku telisina vaallu intamandi unte evaro okkarine inspiration ani elaa cheppanu...
@Swetha
cho chweet:)
enti eee silence??!! everyone busy??
hey jags....u have some kinda magic in ur hand....whtever u write...i mean poetry...they all r really really so gd....tht i cant xpess my feelings....
i liked this poetry very much da...but i have a small doubt....hey r u in LOVE???????????????????????????
SUMA
@suma,
do you have a doubt? he is surely in .. wht say jags ;)
@suma
elaa cheppanu nuvvalaa adigite elaa cheppanu, very soon ee suspense reveal chesestaaa...
@Adarsh
chance dorikite vidichipettaru gaa....
@jags,
ala antare gaani intavaraku cheppane ledu.. ee sari vadili pettede ledu... cheppi teeralsinde..
as alwaz,, very touching..chala baaga rasavu... the best part of ur writings is that it makes a software engineer think..!!
probably the only page.. which i keep visiting.. waiting for an update..!!
too much ga vundi.. felt very happy by reading this..
charan krishna
tholi sari chusanu ne roopam' kshanam kshanam ga gundelo migilipothu undi ne bavam, modati sariga vinipinchidi ne gaanam' nimisham nimisham ga manasulo ki jaripothundi ne raagam, kshanamaina agaleni e kshanam' hrudayam antha cheravestu undi ne mounam.
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