Wednesday, March 08, 2006

a dream 4 u....

14 comments:

Anonymous said...

me first! me first! :D
truly a gr8 poem.
n a gr8 pic!!
chala chala baagundi.

jags said...

@Archie....Thanx a ton for ur compliments both for my poetry and my pic too:P

Arch said...

hey jags!!!!
adhiripoiyindhi...

uday said...

nice poem jags! one of ur best I must say...short n sweet!

The Goddess said...

hmm... interesting... is it dedicated to anyone in particular?

jags said...

@Uday ...Thnx and so nice tht u get back to me

@Sam ...Dediacate to none in particular, its all abt a person whom I dream abt

Anonymous said...

you deserve it buddy! :)
how r ya??

suresh said...

amazing poem.. nee kalala prapanchamloni sundari nee nija jeevitamloki raavalani korukuntu..

XmPt said...

mamu cheppatam marchipoya!!

maa amma nee fan ra ippudu :p osari nee pomes anni save chesi uncahamani tolded

Ravi Kanth said...

Hallo Jags mava..
eppatilaage nee poem adurs...
chinna correction ..
7th line lo Kallu badlu KaLLu(As in MaLayaLam melika 'La') aite correst kada..

Keep rocking....
Asuvu ga raasava? Nijam ga evaraina unnara alanti swapna sundari??

jags said...

@Ravi emo mari exact typing raale english to telugu kadaa konchem spelling mistakes tappav. kaani akkada aa la use cheyyatame correct emo anipinchindi..adi simplified form laa undaalani. swapna sundarundi unte guarantee love ki unde aa real feeling ni pettagalige vaadini, i still feel aa real feel miss avutundemo ani

Praveena said...

ivala chusa nee comment in my pg jags..!! ages since i logged into blogger!!
"nenu srushtinchukunna premaki pratiroopam neevu" - awesome use of words... inka anni posts chadavaledu..i think will have to read them now.. "awesome" is not enuff to describe ur posts!!

jags said...

@Praveena

Dhanyosmi

రాధిక said...

నాకు చివరి 4 లైనులు చాలా నచ్చాయి.