suryodayum to paate naa manasulo andamayina aalochana,
tolisaari nee roopum naalo,
sheeta kaalum naati toli vekuvalaa tochindi,
snehamoo prema maatrame telisina vaallaki,
naa bhaavanalanelaa telupanu....
kalledurugaa kanipiste tappa nammani vaallaki,
kanapadani naa manasulo ninnelaa chupanu...
neemeeda naakunna ishtum maatallo cheppalenidi,
mana bandhum saashwatum kaakapovachchu kaani
manum gadipina ee kshaanalu kala kaalum nilichipotaay,
mana madya doorum gunde chappudu roopum lo tarigipotundi,
suryodayum manalni marinta daggara chestundi...
ney vechi unnaa nee kotta talapula kosam aasaga,
ravi raaka kosam vechi unna aa neeli ningilaa,
ippudu ningii nenu iddarum okkatey,
vechi chustunnaam O andamayina anubooti kosam...
varameeyavaa nestum okka kshanum naa jeevitaaniki ardaannistundi
12 comments:
hey jags its just awesome!!!
may b this is the first time tht i read ur poetry completely,its really superb.
well keep writting more......
:o adirindi raa annna..
nuvvu naaku ekkaddooooo kanipistunnavvuuuu^:)^ Hats ooooffff to u
Apu
"a mind-boggling poem!!!!!!!!!
''snehamoo prema maatrame telisina vaallaki,
naa bhaavanalanelaa telupanu..''
ee okka line chalu jags!!! nee aloochanalu nelage entha swacchamainavo telusukovadaniki……maa andariki teliyajesavu….bandhalalo vatti snehamo leka premano vundavani…..daniki minchina bandham kuda vuntundhani….adi matallo cheppalemani….....
elagaithe kanipinchani gali manandariki entha avasaramo, adi vundadam entha nijamo alage aa bandhum kuda prati manishi ki avasaramani..adi grahinchadam kuda anthe avasaramani……chala baga cheppav…..
‘’vechi chustunnaam O andamayina anubooti kosam...’’
this shows ur welcoming nature…...
Don’t stop writing jags!!!
The way u relate things is awesome…..
U make us see things in a different direction…..
go on jags!!!
@swetha, appu and anonymous, thanx for ur compliments, me laanti friends always keep me giving new thots.
nice one :). kani i dunno... may be i am not equipped well enough to comment on this :D.. inka experience avasaram naku :)
nice one :). kani i dunno... may be i am not equipped well enough to comment on this :D.. inka experience avasaram naku :)
jags ee poem 2 muchh vundhii...asala poetry raayadam oka high lite ante,relatin tat stuff wid da very beautiful nature awesome!!!
da best thing i like is tat da relation mite not get along but these few precious moments ani wow!!!2 gud....i can simply always say keep postin more poems such whihc convey da meaning of real love....
Am Outta Words :|...
The Best...
Ammamma ni adigi mari cheppinchukunna telusa...
did'nt get few words...she also luved it off....
Wayy 2 Go re>:D<
what else can I say...i like the way u express..be it anything.. jus amazin
keep them comin buddy!!
hmmm..
baagundayya jagdeesuuuuu....
enthakanaa..aemi chepaloo naaku theliyadamu laedu..endukantey..nee kavithalu..chaala high level gaa anipistunnayyii...naaku artham chaesukovadaaniki..*sigh**..aemi baashaaa....aemi stylee..abbababbabbbabaaaaaaaaaaaabbbbbbbbbbbbaaaa....[:P]
Kummesav boss....Excellent one....
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